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38 Responses

  1. Travis says:

    I really like the new page- Lye is a cool-looking character we haven’t seen before. I like her hair color. Cool page brohirrim!

  2. Travis says:

    Love THE new page. The moment with the Root Dwellers is great.

  3. You had better plan on the eventual movie rights……..

  4. Mutterscrawl says:

    I really like the comic but for some reason my comments are in all caps despite my capslock not being on and not being in caps in other places?

    • jordan says:

      Thanks for letting me know. I’m not sure why that’s happening but I’ll look into. Glad you like the comic!

    • jordan says:

      hmmm…interesting. I hit refresh on the page and the comments were back to normal. Try that and let me know what happens.

  5. more capitalized comments please! ;)

    • jordan says:

      Maybe I’ll do a comic page that’s all CAPS!!! Or just fix the comments page. Maybe I’ll do that.

  6. Gillsing says:

    More proofreading from me: In the second panel of page 7 in Chapter 3, I think “prefer to called” should be “prefer to be called”.

  7. World Clock says:

    - Hominids Comic great ideas for this world!

  8. I reckon something truly special in this site.

  9. It’s a pity you don’t have a donate button! I’d most certainly donate to this brilliant blog! I suppose for now i’ll settle for bookmarking and adding your RSS feed to my Google account. I look forward to fresh updates and will talk about this website with my Facebook group. Chat soon!

  10. LaughingTarget says:

    Found my way over from Bearmageddon. So far, this is an intriguing story. Hard to get used to those gigantic forearms, even though they make perfect sense in-cannon. Read the whole thing up to last Tuesday in basically one big sitting. Keep up the good work, have favorited and will return regularly.

    • jordan says:

      Glad you like it despite the Popeye forearms. I’ve started to get really used to them and sometimes I have to remind myself not to draw them on the human characters. Thanks for checking it out.

  11. eric says:

    pretty fancy layout… I like it. Cool how the “new page” is highlighted. Great art too.

    • jordan says:

      Thanks Eric! I really wanted the to layout to fit with the world and story. Glad you like it.

  12. David says:

    Interesting comic, will definitely continue reading it!

  13. Mutazoid says:

    Awesome artwork! I’m hooked now! Looking forward to Tuesday!!

  14. Great website, will come back soon … keep up to good work.
    Regards,

  15. anglophony says:

    This is stupendous ,a potential to be ranked with only a few others with its intriguing storyline, and a artwork to drool over.
    the only pick to nit over are these : the page presentation is a little clumsy ( and you have to pay attention or you’ll find yourself cliking on pages more than once ( d’oh ))
    You need to check the html on chapter two cuz page nine does NOT show upon clicking, and half of the “leave a reply” had to be done blindly ( no can see typing ).

    OH yeah, one more thing, update more frequently :-D

    • jordan says:

      Thanks for the great feedback Anglophony, and for pointing out some of the bugs! The site is relatively new so some of it is trial and error. I’m going to play around with some things so that everything is as clear as possible. I also fixed the page 9 bug. I’m really glad you pointed that out as it’s one of my favorite pages!

  16. Gillsing says:

    I noticed that the vote incentive changed, so I figured that the comic might be updating again. And so it is! And the comic reader seems to require less clinking than the previous one, so that’s nice. The comic itself always looked awesome, and still does. :-D

    In panel 4 of page 5, is “why are we stopped” supposed to be “why have we stopped”?

    • jordan says:

      I’m glad the new voting incentive brought you back! It’ll change each week with the new page as well! I’m glad you like the new look too! Thanks for proofing too! Man, that’s helpful.

  17. son of god says:

    Appreciating the time and effort you put into your site and detailed information you offer. It’s great to come across a blog every once in a while that isn’t the same old rehashed material. Wonderful read! I’ve bookmarked your site and I’m adding your RSS feeds to my Google account.

  18. The Code CrimsonThT says:

    Wow! The art in this is spectacular! I am really blown away by the details. It reminds me almost of Avatar. Great stuff, can’t wait to read more!

  19. Dragon says:

    At long last, the beginning of chapter 3!

    I’m digging the new layout, though I’m not sure about all caps for the comments. Feels like everyone’s yelling. I guess a little extra enthusiasm can’t hurt though, lol. :)

    • jordan says:

      Thanks Dragon. The text does feel way too big on the comments. I’m working on getting them to a readable size. Thanks for the feedback.

  20. Misael says:

    DUUUUUDE! Love the site. Love the comic. Keep on keeping on.

  21. Howdy! This is my 1st comment here so I just wanted to give a quick shout out and say I genuinely enjoy reading through your posts. Can you recommend any other blogs/websites/forums that go over the same topics? Thank you!

  22. Fantastic post, thanks a lot. The blog got a new reader.

  23. We wish your posts had a lot more comments, to create future discussion about your posts.

    • jordan says:

      I agree, Aaron. I would love for there to be more comments. The site has only been up for a few days so I am hopeful that they will start rolling in. No time like the present to start though. How do you feel about the site?

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