I’m not going to lie.
A week ago this page wasn’t even in the script.
I was going over the flow of the chapter and I came upon a problem with the two newest pages. They were being rushed. Not art wise, but from a storytelling perspective. I needed to take a step back and buffer the transitions between scenes to help it flow better. Once the next few pages are released, you’ll see what I’m talking about.
As for this weeks page, some of the dialog was cut from a later scene and brought over here. It made more sense to put it here as Zona is making sense of everything that is happening and she’s trying to plan her next move. This also allows that later scene to breath a bit more.
We also get a chance to make sure Basse is going to make it out okay. Say what you will about him, he’s a big, untrustworthy jerk, but you’d still want him on your side.
