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  1. Jude says:

    In the 2nd panel, in Keyli’s speech bubble, you’re mixing up two different verb tenses – stumble and saving. It should be “…wouldn’t be stumbling” to agree with “…and saving them”. Or instead use “…and save them” to match “…wouldn’t stumble”.

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